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Thread: Mi Dominicana

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    Default Mi Dominicana

    It was love at first sight,

    I was hooked the first night,

    I've never had a feeling like this in my life.

    She was warm like spring weather,

    I feel I've known her forever,

    she's stuck in my mind and I'll never forget her.

    She made me want to dance with her infectuous ryhthm,

    salsa, merengue and bachata got all in my system.

    "Dance with me baby, please hold me near."

    These words in spanish she whispered in my ear.

    And eventhough she was this way with all of the fellas,

    I never felt threatened or even got jealous.

    Because when my heart I consider her as my own,

    I was lost before but in her I found home.

    In her tranquillity I found comfort and rest,

    of all I've known before she's the absolute best.

    In no way is she rich and probably will never be,

    but I love the way she doesn't worry but just lives her life free.

    I love her completely, in all her goodness and her faults,

    everyday she's the subject of most of my thoughts.

    I can't wait till the day I can be with her again,

    I know those are moments I will never want to end.

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    Smile

    nice!

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    FABULOSA!!!

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    Talking Oh, how sweet!!!

    Negro Lindo...there should be more men like you on this earth!!!

    That is very sweet...you should send her a copy of the poem, I'm sure she will be very proud of her man!!!

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    Oye Negro.

    Macho up dude! i'll admit I would say and do a lot of things to get some but I draw the line at poetry!
    Who do you think got more P*ssy? Hemingway or Keats?

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    Originally posted by Tony C
    Oye Negro.

    Macho up dude! i'll admit I would say and do a lot of things to get some but I draw the line at poetry!
    Who do you think got more P*ssy? Hemingway or Keats?
    Tony,

    Some guys already get enough, so they don't need to "macho up" like you.

    Look, he's already got MusicQueen in the palm of his hand!

    Besides, Hemingway and Keats were BOTH pajaros - however Hemingway decided to "macho up" like you. Hmn.

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    Default Tony, no seas malo!

    The guy is in love, let him be. Geez don't you remember how hard you had to work to get Mrs. C.

    Negrito as long as she likes it don't listen to these "dudes" . Por ahi viene CC so brace yourself Negrito.

    Lina
    Last edited by linamia; 03-27-2003 at 12:44 PM.

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    Thumbs up Negro Lindo

    I was about to compose a comical poem in response to yours but I have enough of the females on here snapping at me lately and I dont want to make any more enemies lol. Actually, I think you are quite a poet. I hope things work out for you and your dominicana
    Larry

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    Thanks for all the nice compliments people...

    Tony C , I don't waste time trying to be macho, it comes naturally, the fact that I can express myself in this way and not worry about being macho is one of the very reason that I don't have time to worry about now much some old dead guy was getting because I'm getting more that I can handle at times.......but I digress.

    It's cool Larry, we all need a good laugh right.

    The little poem is more about my first visit to The DR than about a girl anyway. I just called it Mi Dominicana.

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    Default Re: Tony, no seas malo!

    Originally posted by linamia
    The guy is in love, let him be. Geez don't you remember how hard you had to work to get Mrs. C.
    Lina
    Hard? Work? HaHAha. Now that is funny!
    Try Selected!

    Negrito,

    I aparently touched a nerve. Have fun with your Tampons!

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